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You are breaking my heart a little more everyday!
Just making it harder and harder for me to stay!
You know how much I love you, you have too.
I need you in my life I really do.
But you're making it so hard on me and I dont know why.
Sometimes I just want to break down and plead and cry.
I cant leave it alone and I cant let it be,
why cant you just marry me?
Its not fair that I am the one who always has to compromise.
You get whatever you want and I cant have this, WHY?
I am good to you and try to keep satisfied.
But you are hurting my heart my soul and pride.
Stop being so selfish its not always about you.
This is all I'm asking this is all you have to do.
But if you cant do this for me I cant promise I wont leave.
Because me needing you isnt enough I need you to need me.
Posted by Tinkerbitch at 12:01 AM - 7 Comments   Add a Comment  
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Wow, Stellar Write.  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Wednesday May 28, 2008 @ 12:34 AM




Mood Swing??...Naybe if we could find the First set of rings you all had, you would feel better??? MAYBE  
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by LilLadyReg (PM , CC ) on Friday May 30, 2008 @ 1:03 PM




I dont know what would make me feel better! I think I am having horrible mood swings now... Dont know whats going on with me but I feel unhappy and I need something more... maybe it'll get better.  
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by Tinkerbitch (PM , CC ) on Saturday May 31, 2008 @ 1:17 AM




Tink,
I think that was a VERY nice piece. I have read some of your others as well. Keep up the good work. BTW I feel in the most part some of your feelings that come out in your writing. Have a good day!
 
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by Crone (PM , CC ) on Saturday May 31, 2008 @ 12:25 PM




I do try to be open hearted and real when writting these things. I am not very deep though. I think I just rhyme well though. I am glad so many people enjoy my writting b/c its something I enjoy!  
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by Tinkerbitch (PM , CC ) on Sunday June 1, 2008 @ 12:11 AM




So, you write from the heart, but not deep. I didn't realize the heart was on the surface of our bodies. Big words doesn't make a poem deep. The feel of the poem does. If the words came from deep down in your heart, and others felt it, guess what. But then again, this is only 1-man-view. As they would say in RESPECT, on one of the poem sites I go too. Write On......  
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by 1manview (PM , CC ) on Sunday June 1, 2008 @ 1:11 AM




It is all very heart felt. I try very hard. But I am no way a poet. Poets are very artist like or something. I dont know just better. gotta go company!  
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by Tinkerbitch (PM , CC ) on Sunday June 1, 2008 @ 10:45 PM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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